WB: 2/12/24 English- Editing and Improving

 This week, Year 4 have been looking at editing their own work. After writing some brilliant versions of Podkin, it was time to look at how we can change our work for the better.

The children used the new level system of editing to get the best out of their work. We had level 1, which was basic correcting and proofreading, all the way to level 3 that involved replacing and removing sentences and words. 


Take a look!








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